Essentially, MC replaces Liu Bei as the third power in the Three Kingdom Period. This story is nearly entirely about politics and intrigue and the introduction of the fabulous inventions that the MC brought back with him from the future. In fact, once they've married, MC will rarely have any time to spend with his wives at all, other than some interactions here and there. MC's relationship with his wives doesn't really develops. This might not be for everyone, but personally, I love it. At least one of MC's generals suffer this fate upon their defeat. The author isn't afraid to show the brutality of war and the cruel methods some people used to inflict pain on their enemies before they die. This is a story about Ancient China, so you know there's gonna be some very violent stuff happening around MC. Still, I did enjoy the most of the story. Four hundred, if the author actually decided stick with the Hun Invasion plot-line. If done right, it could've lasted at least two hundred more chapters.
#Fatherly lumo series
It's fairly obvious that the author just lost interest and ended the series well before its time. The story starts out a bit weak, then gains a lot of momentum around the middle part, but ultimately and completely falls apart at the end. Why give MC the ability to travel back to the modern period when you're just gonna take it away, permanently?Īnyhow, let me just say this first. Fortunately, in my opinion, this doesn't really hurt the story, but the author could've just saved us all some time and just made MC stuck in the past from the beginning. But, for some reason, this plot is eventually phased out and the MC lose contact with the future completely. The MC is the sole link that ties the ancient world and the modern one. It's main draw is that a modern person has the ability to travel back and forth in time. And why would a commander chase a cavalry?Īh, this story has a complicated spot in my head. That cavalry shouldn't even have enough energy left to fight. Kiting heavy infantry by discarding equipment and retreat? As if a commander worth a dime would be so s*upid to order a chase with heavy infantry, in an enemy city! And another kiting with heavy cavalry, after said cavalry had just forced march for days. At most they would be recognized as excellent replicas of ancient crafts.Īnd those ridiculous fight scenes and tactics. They are bred for race and I am sure there is no armored lance charge competition.Īnd how did they sell historical artifacts that fast at that price? Can they even count as historical artifacts? While the craftsmanship and tools used are ancient, the object itself is new. Then there are transportation, imports permits, vets, warehouses. Who would take such a random order? And then the armor would need to be refit on-site since people have different body shape.Īnd ordering thousands of racehorses? Just contacting all those ranches is going to be hell.
And who would accept a random person order that easily? It isn't like the factory will always have enough remaining capacity and manpower for some random order. Especially if our MC want stamping pressed armor. Ordering equipment from the factory? They have to design the equipment and make tools to produce it. You need to place an order to a factory/shop. Ordering thousands of old steamed buns? Sure you can, but not by asking cafeteria lady. Oh, and how the hell did MC process all those orders with the short time he gets back? You cannot just walk in and order shits. It will make a horrible lance, difficult to wield, and it will break. MC should have died in the first fight.Īluminum reinforced with plot armor is strong though.Īnd using modified sports javelin as a lance? Lance, spear, javelin all have different balance and design. And armor with huge openings like saint armor should be easy. And ancient soldiers aren't so s*upid they don't know to aim for the armor gap. Even if it didn't dent the armor, the force of the blow alone could bruise the man inside. more> through the armor with a single hit, but it will make a good dent which will press on the flesh, injuring and restricting what under it. A good hit with a bronze/iron weapon will damage it. Saying it makes an OP armor compared to the bronze/iron armor of the time is BS. (It is just a lot more abundant and thus, cheaper.) It isn't stronger than iron, which isn't really stronger than bronze. OP aluminum saint armor? The aluminum might be light, but they are not that strong. I can overlook a few mistakes, but this is too much. I wonder if the author ever researched anything at all.
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